Stay alone or get married,that is the question.Nowadays,when you are living in a busy society,you will have many things to manage and choose such as education, job, friend, family even the marriage...And you do not know what to choose.It can make you confused and easy to get stressful.Most of people want to get married but the others ignore that.Personally, I think staying alone is the best politics to relax your life.
First of all,staying alone gives you freedom.If you stay alone, you do not need to go home to prepare the dinner after you leave your office.You can go somewhere with your friends and eat something you like.You also go to the cinema to watch the film you like without worry about the housework or the children or the husband. If you get married, you can not go out with your friends after leaving your office.You also can not go out at the midnight with your friends.You have to spend all of your time to take care of your children or do household.You do not have any free time for yourselves.So,in my opinion,staying alone is the wisdom.Stay alone to free to do everything you like!
Secondly,staying alone helps you widen their knowledge.You have to quit your job after getting married because you have to stay at home to do housework and take care of their little family.Even if you do not quit your job, you also can not focus on your job or finish it well because you have to spend a lot of time to look after your husband and your children.But if you stay alone, you can continue your job and use what you learnt in the university effectively.Moreover,you can learn more to get promotion and have a higher position.You can spend all your time to work.It can give you a chance to promote easily.So staying alone improves your ability.
Once day,when you are sick or have some problem in your life or when you feel lonely,who will share with you?Your parents will be passed away,your friends will get married and they are busy with their family and they can not stand by you,how will you feel?Sad and lonely?!However, you can make you happy by adapt a children to take care of him and he can share with you anything.Besides, you can raise a pet to make friend with you.You also can give all of love for your job and feel satisfy to what you can do for life.If you have a lot of money, you can travell all over the world to meet different cultures.Staying alone helps you enjoy your life.
In short,the life always has two face,choose one and lose one but staying alone is still better.It not only gives you freedom and a chance to get promotion but also helps you reduce stress and enjoy the life.Staying alone is the best!
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